Tuesday, June 26, 2007

The Murderer

When a girl tells a guy- lets be jus friends, he gets heart broken. He never thinks from the girl's point of view. He walks around like Devdas n doesn't even talk to the girl... here's how d girl probably feels after losing his frenship.



A girl's point of view -


THE MURDERER

His sparkling eyes and loving nature
All died when she said no.
It was as if she had killed
his every feeling, his every emotion.
His heart broken down
And in it's place, an emotionless pacemaker
It felt no pain
It was beyond all that.
Warmth and life was sucked out.
He lived because he had to
The want and desire was gone.
Would it ever come back?
She often wondered.

The guilt had never left her.
What she had done haunted her
And it probably would forever
She was a murderer.
Nobody could deny that
Nothing could change that
The past was part of her life.

She tried to connect to him
But words failed to do so.
maybe it was fate, maybe destiny
Or maybe it was her punishment.
His very name brought memories,
very sweet ones
But her name...
What did he feel?
Pain, sorrow, regret, anger, despair?
She wished she could read him
But she could read nobody.
Hopeless, useless that's what she felt.
After all she was a murderer.






warning-again this is only my opinion. all girls may not be like this

2 comments:

lifezblues said...

R u sure even within the scope of opnion that this is how the girls heart feels . Well as a guy and in your terms i have been murdred once by a girl and i also am a murderer for someother girl .. Though both of them took a good time ago with abig time period between them . But a s a guy i felt almost xactly as u xplaiend .Good to know that even a girl feels the same too.

misskays said...

like i said. it's purely my opinion after seeing wht so many of my gal frenz went thru